Is https://blender.meta.stackexchange.com/questions/ask a good place to get second opinions on changes being made to documentation?
BSE and our meta has no connection (aside from whatever users contribute to both) to blender's official docs. Posting a change to blender's doc on the meta here will never make it into a change.
Instead if you found something that needs fixing, just edit it yourself.
Gandalf wrote up a great post on how to get started Improving the Blender manual.
Even if you don't want to go through the whole process to edit the manual yourself you still should not post your changes on the meta here. You can report problems here: https://developer.blender.org/project/board/53/
If you just want a quick second opinion to a change (not too large) I would recommend you head over to our site's main chat room or more appropriately the Manual Project room (the reason I say the renderfarm first is because there is always somebody there); and post your change in there.